At dawn all life begins to feel
that nature stirs, and starts to peal
her bells; announcing time to wake
the earth, from Winters' sleepy break.
On slender stem, those long slim leaves
create the daffodil's green sleeves.
With yellow trumpet she will sing
to herald birth of fresh new Spring.
Twigs will burst with new born buds,
while creatures wake and nature floods
the earth with life, renewed from sleep,
and flowers over meadows sweep.
The sun shines through a softened breeze,
the scene is set, I feel at ease.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Red Dragon (220.127.116.11) -- Saturday, April 19 2003, 03:31 am|
Wow! all of nature and its seasons...i like this...sounds like written by a pro...makes me revitalized....cool description...good work Cap...
|barb (18.104.22.168) -- Saturday, April 19 2003, 09:28 pm|
oh cap you know how to describe things with a flare.I hope winter over it feels good doen't it.
|Capricorn (22.214.171.124) -- Saturday, April 19 2003, 11:18 pm|
Thanks for the compliment Red, but I'm no pro! I have recently been reading `how to write a sonnet' which I think I've done here. Glad you liked it.
|Capricorn (126.96.36.199) -- Saturday, April 19 2003, 11:20 pm|
Hi Barb.... I have taken to writing poems about nature in between my bouts of venting!! Haha!!
|luc (188.8.131.52) -- Sunday, April 20 2003, 05:20 am|
the ryming is just perfect. cuplets.. i love it. the whole topic as well.. good writing cap, i like that ending
|Capricorn (184.108.40.206) -- Sunday, April 20 2003, 11:48 pm|
Thank you Luc I do appreciate your comments
|Roy (220.127.116.11) -- Monday, April 21 2003, 03:04 pm|
As beautiful as the new day---Lovvve it
|Capricorn (18.104.22.168) -- Tuesday, April 22 2003, 01:47 am|
Oh Thank you Roy!
|timothy (22.214.171.124) -- Thursday, January 31 2008, 12:00 am|
can i use your poem for school
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