Certain Outlooks Change
Author: LinzAy


I've broken my fingernails in this fight
I've tampered with my knowings of wrong and right
I've pulled out half my hair as I screamed
And I've lived my nightmares instead of my dreams
I've cried a thousand tears that will never dry
I've done thing I shouldn't have knowing why

How does life treat you
And how well do you handle the fight?


I've repaired my mouth-it smiles again
I've embraced the future and forgot about what happened then
I don't want to fight life anymore, I'll welcome the struggle
Endure as many let downs and as much pain as I can juggle
I look down the path not chosen by many and smile
Looking forward to the changes within the miles

Life has treated me as it always will
But it's been better now that I accept it
-Now that i have a different outlook on it


Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian ( -- Thursday, October 28 2004, 12:55 am

Nicely done

Enjoyable Read LinzAy LinzAy! I hope to see more of your work soon! Your writing style, strikes me with awe! You beautifully described change in this poem! Bravo! Bravo on your transition!

Smiley face,
LinzAy ( -- Thursday, October 28 2004, 08:46 pm


Thankyou so much for your comment! I'm workin a lot lately now that i've finally got myself a job so, dunno how many poems I'll be submitting....but i'll do muh best :)
Thanks again
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