Trapped in my cage,I can't pursue
my dreams when life goes wrong.
Strapped in this mind,I can't construe
that hell would last so long.
Slapped in my face,my mind askew.
I cry my sombre song.
Wrapped in the warmth to help me renew
my strength and hope prolong.
Clapped by applause at getting through
to sing my victory song
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Martin Vann (22.214.171.124) -- Thursday, April 10 2003, 01:23 pm|
I understand what you are saying here and you sound so, strong, because you have to be. Yet, there are times when anchors seem to hold us in the deep and all we wish to do is surface, if just for a little while.
Tender, but strong, beautiful thoughts which as I say, I think, I understand how you must feel sometimes and I think of you often, waht a person you are.
|barb (126.96.36.199) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 01:22 am|
Oh cap I do understand what you're going through but I admire all the crap you have to deal with. Lots would have given up, but not you. you are caring and kind .good writing You put down your feelings and that helps.
|Capricorn (188.8.131.52) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 01:50 am|
Martin....yes i have to be strong but sometimes it's hard. Thank you for your kind thoughts
|Capricorn (184.108.40.206) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 01:52 am|
Thanks for your support Barb.At least I've got rid of my writer's block! haha! ...and I still plod on......
|Dino (220.127.116.11) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 05:55 am|
Very nice poem, I like this one. The way you use your words. You broke down your writer's block and given us a nice poem to read. Keep being strong Cap. Thanks.
|LinzAy (18.104.22.168) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 09:55 pm|
O wow.....i like this!!!! Great writing Cap!
|luc (22.214.171.124) -- Saturday, April 12 2003, 07:37 am|
that middle stanza got to me.. it was just wow.. hehe.. good writing.. like always cap.. encore encore :)
|Capricorn (126.96.36.199) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 11:37 pm|
Thanks Dino! Glad you liked this one. At last my writers block has gone again...Haha!!Thanks for your kind words.
|Capricorn (188.8.131.52) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 11:38 pm|
Thanks LinzAy, glad you liked!!
|Capricorn (184.108.40.206) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 11:40 pm|
Hi Luc....glad you enjoyed this. Glad I lost my writers block..at last!!
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