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What Did I Do To Deserve This
28 October, 2004
Author: Vampyr Lost In Love

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What did i do to deserve this much hate. I was there for you when you cried all the tears you cried. I was there then. Now when I need someone the most no one is there for me. What happened to me and you. Now all I wish for is death of my poor mortal life. I am just crying as I watch my world self-destruct right in front of my very own eyes with no one there to tell me it would be okay. Just give it time and everything will come together in time. Just wait and see, put the knife down so you can see!

------- Author's Notes -------

I hate when I am so nice to someone become really good "friends" with them....then they are not there for me

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Thursday, October 28 2004, 02:56 pm

I'll listen

In this world there are givers and takers, you are one who shines the most,
You are one who cares without trying,
A giver you are and do not change,
For the more you give the better you become,
You change lifes of others and that is a task held so high,
To be there for you just send an E-mail
joyce ivy (65.12.41.214) -- Thursday, October 28 2004, 04:35 pm

Again I Agree With Clive...

you always have someone here to listen...life will get better...
sometimes life seem dim
all you have to do is think of them
the ones who care for you
whatever we can do...
EMAIL...EMAIL
Vampyr Lost In Love (63.184.176.238) -- Saturday, October 30 2004, 01:41 am

thanx

you guys are really being nice to me...i never really thought i was a good writer...but you guys say i'm good...keep on with the good comments
 
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