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My Days Are About To End
28 October, 2004
Author: Vampyr Lost In Love

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As my days go on
I get sadder and sadder
And as I feel no more pain
The knife cuts me again
And as my life falls apart
My tears fall down
With every day that passes
I lose another Friend
To my stupidity
And as I sit there
At the school
Where everyone knows
Your name
I want to just
Break down and cry
Because I know I won't
Get to see what it's like
And get drunk with my friends
Without having to show ID
I know that I might not
Even get to see what it
Is like to walk across the stage
At my high school graduation
Because with every cut
Made on my body
Kills me alittle more
Each time
So let me live while I can

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Thursday, October 28 2004, 02:50 pm

Powerful

You write so well, you have much to gain from writing this way, you have a future to help others who feel this way, to walk on and come on through is no easy task, But come through you will and help one more other like you,
Keep writing I'll keep reading
joyce ivy (65.12.41.214) -- Thursday, October 28 2004, 04:19 pm

I Agree With Clive

you do write very..and you will come through...keep writing..I will also read...
Vampyr Lost In Love (63.184.176.238) -- Saturday, October 30 2004, 01:43 am

thanx

the more i write the more you guys give good compliments....thanx
 
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