End Of The Day
The sun now rests his weary head
while crimson ribbons fly,
he slumbers in his darkened bed
to fade into the sky.
Now scarlet seeps to dark bruised night;
a silhouetted scene
of darkened trees,a vivid sight
against the rosy sheen.
While moon with guiding light will stand
and diamond stars await,
to burst across the shadowed land.
- a glittering estate!
Comments on this poem/writing:
|barb (184.108.40.206) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 01:40 am|
you sound peaceful here. Night is better for you hey cap very peaceful description.
|Capricorn (220.127.116.11) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 01:47 am|
True Barb,night-time is when I come to life and why I stay up as late as my tired eyes will allow! You understand me well!
|luc (18.104.22.168) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 02:41 am|
sounded like a song to me.. i like it. espceially teh second stanza.
|Crystal (22.214.171.124) -- Sunday, April 13 2003, 09:51 pm|
I really enjoyed this one, Capricorn, I like to see that you can put beautiful colors of words onto the poem.I am now a Big Fan of your poetry.
|barb (126.96.36.199) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 12:38 am|
Crystal she does have a way with words ,doesn't she. I'm glad the writers block is over:)
|Capricorn (188.8.131.52) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 11:42 pm|
Hi Luc. yes i like the second stanza too. Glad you enjoyed!
|Capricorn (184.108.40.206) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 11:46 pm|
Hi Crystal..I am so glad you enjoyed. I have only just started writing poems that are visual with colours. Will have another one coming up soon about the spring.
Barb..I am so glad the `block' has finished too. I am finding I am writing in a different way since too.
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