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Belonging
Author: Mike

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Its always there,
The feeling you don't belong.

You stand around, looking.
Looking at all the smiling faces.
And think "That should be me".
But its not.

The feeling you shouldn't be here,
You shouldn't be there,
You shouldn't be anywhere.
Because you just don't belong.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ben F (82.2.243.143) -- Tuesday, November 2 2004, 09:03 pm

mike

hello mike,
I know what your saying,
but always remember you do belong.
take care
Ben
Mike (82.35.77.233) -- Tuesday, November 2 2004, 11:40 pm

Ben F..

What I wrote is how I feel. I look around, and even though everything seems normal, I feel as if its not. Its hard to explain, I just feel that I have no purpose for being here, no place to go. Thanks for the comment, and the advice though. You take care too =).
Mike
joyce ivy (68.19.188.222) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 08:30 pm

I FEEL THE SAME

seems we have alot in common...I feel the same way most of the time...
My poetry is all that keeps me sane or insane..lol which ever..I do love you poetry..you have the talent...keep writting...I will be reading and looking forward to more...
Leah (204.112.162.35) -- Wednesday, January 5 2005, 09:43 am

...

yeah i bet in a crowded room half the ppl feel
the same way you do....i liek ur poems....keep up
the talented work
Raimee (80.5.40.153) -- Tuesday, March 8 2005, 09:32 pm

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I feel like I'm stuck in a crowded room with suicidal people. I really feel sorry for you guys, I wish happiness was like a cake.. I'd cut a slice off for you. Although, my life isn't all that great. Just two very special people in it. One of them being Mike. :) Keep up the poems Mike, I love them as much as you.. nearly.
LBK (84.9.36.131) -- Friday, March 11 2005, 10:54 pm

;)

I've read ALL your poems tonight and am reading them again to write comments for them :P

I knew you were unhappy and I did all I could to make you happy without letting you know that I knew. I had no idea you felt this strongly for such a long time though.

"Looking at all the smiling faces.
And think "That should be me".
But its not."

I've seen you smile a lot, and yeah, I can tell when you fake it and when you don't

I've also read every comment and Raimee sounds cool :P...Listen to her more often ...
Raimee (80.5.40.153) -- Wednesday, March 23 2005, 09:53 pm

...

Haha, Raimee is cool. ;) Don't you know it!
Arthur (216.162.19.129) -- Friday, May 12 2006, 03:54 pm

please

can I use one of your poems for school
Vicki (76.5.248.164) -- Wednesday, September 19 2007, 11:35 pm

use poem

Wondering if you mind if I use this poem on my blog
 
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