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This Morning
Author: Ben Laney

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I woke up
this mornin'
with my
elbows in my ears
Yes, I woke up
this mornin'
with my
elbows in my ears
My feet
were in my mouth
I could
not walk,
I could
not talk,
and I could not hear!

------- Author's Notes -------

Hey, maybe it was those Long Island teas I drank at the nightclub last night. Whoah boy! Those things will get your horses running all over the place! Now please excuse me kids, I gotta roll back over to the bed .
Big buckets of butterflies, Ben

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.230.166) -- Saturday, October 30 2004, 12:10 am

Ben, ya were honestly drinking and playing???..

boy that must've been a lot of fun..
no kidding about those Long Island Teas...
WOW!! bet that was a sight to see...elbows in your ears and feet in your mouth...glad the butterflies got ya out of a lurch..and just in time did they .....................

hahahaha...thank you Ben, i really needed to laugh.....
Ben Laney (68.127.149.101) -- Sunday, October 31 2004, 04:43 pm

Terrie*, only someone who has been through...

Terrie*, only someone who has been through it too could understand this one. Oh, moderation is a very good thing, my poetic friend! And, yes, it's always funny when it's someone else it's happened too, huuuuuuh? Thank you very much for your kind comment, I am really happy to know it made you laugh.
Your Favoritest Poetic Madman, Ben
 
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