As waves of sleep drift over me
my dreams become reality;
cleansing wounds deep inside my soul,
casting demons from their black hole.
The tide soon floods my mind with peace
as hostage thoughts are soon released.
In dreams I live in fantasy,
where tangled thoughts find sanity.
The waves caress me through the night,
my soul is healed, my mind has sight.
As tides go out at break of dawn
I feel refreshed, my demons gone
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Martin Vann (126.96.36.199) -- Tuesday, March 4 2003, 06:41 pm|
Excellent material, very clear and meaniful to me. Though, I find it difficult to sleep, so much on my mind, perhaps in my sole.. Can't sort it all out, though I try each night.
Very to the point in a soft, gentle way.
|Seizure (188.8.131.52) -- Tuesday, March 4 2003, 06:55 pm|
I liked it Cap... one of your better ones in my opinion. Can't say I can relate to it though as the most I can sleep is about 3 hours each night... I am constantly tired... but then again I probably never reach REM... good work, hope you submit more soon.
|barb (184.108.40.206) -- Wednesday, March 5 2003, 12:01 am|
with sleep comes peace eh cap Loved your poem.
|lasohnda harris (220.127.116.11) -- Wednesday, March 5 2003, 12:18 am|
I agree with the other poets this was an really good poem as alwayse.
|Stacey (18.104.22.168) -- Wednesday, March 5 2003, 02:43 am|
Beautiful...Beautiful...Love this poem Cap, very well written
I look forward to reading your stuff.
Keep up the great work. :)
|Capricorn (22.214.171.124) -- Thursday, March 6 2003, 10:46 pm|
Going through a bad patch at the moment and the only time I feel at peace is when I'm asleep....even though it may not be for long and I don't often remember any dreams.
|Laura (126.96.36.199) -- Tuesday, November 9 2010, 07:35 pm|
May i use your poem to show the class because we are learning about dream poems.
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