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All Alone On Platform 6
Author: Ben Franklin

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Here I am again on
platform 6,
ushering people to there destination,
Wife's at home with the kids.

People demanding information,
no more polite conversation,
just a fast paced nation.

Manager is always on my back,
telling me......
'Ben people skills you lack,
if you carry on with this behaviour
you will end up getting the sack'.

I dont go to work to be insulted,
now I see why the slaves revolted.

Thousands of different people pass through these gates
each day,
women
men
black
white
gay,
but I still feel invisible to the world,

someone please build me a bridge,
because Im all alone on platform
6

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ben F (82.2.243.143) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 04:18 pm

no title

oh and this not about me.
Terrie* (65.148.212.210) -- Friday, November 5 2004, 11:45 pm

Ben, you know how to capture an audience..

amazing how you are able to place yourself in anothers shoes...to be able to see life through their soul ...thank you for this Ben...it really is a dog eat dog world out there..

great read...from a mighty person...
Ben F (81.100.175.39) -- Saturday, November 6 2004, 09:25 am

Man at london bridge...

I always have to swap platforms at london bridge station to get into main london,
and thats platform 6,
I always see the same conductor(usher) there,always looking misrible.
but hey can ya blame him!!!
thanks alot Terrie*,
I look forward to your thoughts all the time.
much love
Ben.
 
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