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Goodnight
Author: Mike

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I lay down on this bed of black,
Hoping to sleep and never awake,
Hoping to be taken beyond my dreams,
My soul is here for you to take.

But yet you always stay away
And ignore my heartfelt plea.
It seems the more I cry and beg
The faster you seem to flee.

So I wish that I could finally go
To a place where I can rest in peace.
Safe in the reassuring knowledge
That this pain I feel will never increase.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

joyce ivy (68.19.188.222) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 08:21 pm

I SEARCH FOR THAT PEACE ALSO

mike this is very good...you write well...
Raimee (80.5.40.153) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 09:05 pm

omg k.

MIKE ITS REALLY GOOD PLZ. AND YEAH I LOVE YOU PLZ. For people who think "Why is she saying that to a stranger?" haha.. I know him okay. And yeah damn right he writes good. 8)
Anthony Wright (amwright) (66.53.12.85) -- Friday, November 19 2004, 04:21 am

Yep...

he writes very well.
LBK (84.9.36.131) -- Friday, March 11 2005, 11:01 pm

...

Don't go. Don't run away.
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

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