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Apology In Process....
3 November, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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I admit
I did wrong

I apologize
I was not very strong

I broke down
and cried

someone else
my eyes they dried

I tried very hard
to refrain

I stood my ground
to prevent myself going insane

I was not prepared
to take that highway..

that lead
me away

from the comfort
of the only love
I had known

It broke my heart
that day
when they carried you away..

------- Author's Notes -------

death only separates a body but not a heart..

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Comments on this poem/writing:

joyce ivy (68.19.188.222) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 08:14 pm

I Am With You Terrie

Seems were on the same track today...I feel every word you have written here...I wrote 2 today myself about my my...My Bright And Shining Star and MOM...she has been dead 2 months today..I miss her so much...and you are so right...death doesn't seperate your heart from them...they will always be there...I am so very sorry for your loss...I feel your pain...your poem is beautifully written..I loved it...
your friend...
Joyce
Terrie* (65.148.207.124) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 10:09 pm

Joyce, thank you...

happy to hear that you enjoy this...
do not be sorry for my loss..
be happy for my new love ....
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

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