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Black Velvet And Diamonds 2
Author: Capricorn

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Look! - the stars have kissed the sky.
Twinkling diamonds shining high.
Black velvet covers the earth below
a curtain to shade from the day's glow.

When we slumber in our dreams tonight
the moon will join this beautiful sight.
His pale beams stretch across the land
while twinkling stars all join their hands.

Such beauty causes me to sigh.
Look! - the stars have kissed the sky.
The moon's pale envy turns night to a hush
and at dawn the velvet sky will blush.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (64.12.96.46) -- Friday, February 14 2003, 06:48 am

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aw! that was such a cute addition to part one.....i especially like the blushing sky part! Good one cap!
Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Friday, February 14 2003, 11:06 am

Thanks LinzAy

Thanks for your comment LinzAy. I though some kissing would be nice for Valentine's Day! hehe!! Hope you have a good one!
CrYsTaL (204.32.64.192) -- Saturday, April 5 2003, 08:02 pm

second I've read

Oh, man! This poem is the most colorful thing I have ever seen, like I said, I'm Crystal, and I'll keep reading.
Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Sunday, April 6 2003, 12:45 am

Thanks again!

Thankyou CrYsTaL...I'm glad you liked this as it's one of my favourites.
Bipedalguy (4.156.108.124) -- Friday, December 22 2006, 05:14 am

I just discovered this one.

This is my idea of excellent writing. I really like this and the first version, which I also just read.
Beautiful !!
Capricorn (82.46.210.184) -- Saturday, December 23 2006, 01:31 am

Thanks Bipedalguy

What a surprise reading your reply -- I wrote this a few years ago. How nice to hear it's still appreciated ... thank you!
 
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