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Oh! That Damn Baby
Author: Capricorn

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I've just got up this morning
and I'm running late.
Shall I check my messages?
No they'll have to wait!

Baby is crying!

I have to carry on now
I need to mop the floor,
and wash up the dishes.
Oh this is such a bore!

Baby is still crying!

I have to carry on now
and get some ironing done.
Really! - what a lot there is
this is not much fun.

Oh that baby is still crying!

Just look at the windows,
baby I'll not listen.
I must shine them well now,
until they really glisten.

Oh, damn that baby crying!

Oh! damn you computer
with your big baby eyes
I can't resist any longer!
-any messages, a surprise!

Oooooh! Mama loves her baby now

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (216.129.37.250) -- Wednesday, February 26 2003, 06:51 pm

had me going

very good writing like the twist of it.It didn't sound like you. then I realized what you meant. an excellent writing.
Martin Vann (63.208.42.180) -- Wednesday, February 26 2003, 09:42 pm

I'm going to get you for this one, Cap!

All I thought was "child abuse," and it "was" child abuse, you played with my youthful mind. This time, you went to far, you were so, un-kind! I have the same baby, crying all the TIME! I love your poems, but, I'm going to get you for this one Cap!

How cruel and cooooooool you are, Cap, I going to get you.

MartinV
Stacey (68.82.126.206) -- Wednesday, February 26 2003, 10:10 pm

A Poem to make One Smile

Cap... omg.. you crack me up. This poem definitely made me smile. You are WAY too CREATIVE.
Keep up the great work girl !! I love reading your poems.
~Stacey
lasohnda harris (12.229.199.53) -- Thursday, February 27 2003, 12:33 am

interesting

you sound like my bestfriend interesting I feel that you was worn out and tired and frustrated and that's ok just as long as you don;t hit the babies.
Dino (67.26.83.77) -- Thursday, February 27 2003, 04:57 am

Ha,ha,ha!

Ha,ha,ha, I thought you were pissed off with the neighbor's baby. You had me fooled, good one!
Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Thursday, February 27 2003, 09:02 pm

To Barb, Martin V. Stacey, Lasohnda, and Dino.

Barb
Hope I didn't worry you too much Barb, I haven't `flipped' just yet.

Martin
I'm looking forward to you getting me back, haha! Yes my `baby' seems to cry for me such a lot, can't seem to get things done.

Stacey
Well I've been drinking that tea again!

Lasohnda
Don't worry, I was refering to my computer as the baby,always demanding my attention. My `babies' are both grown up now and I never left them crying for long.

Dino
Glad I got you fooled...wondered if this one would have the desired effect.

Thank you all for your comments and `Mama loves her baby now!'
lasohnda harris (12.229.199.53) -- Thursday, February 27 2003, 10:07 pm

oh, da

da I new that ha,ha
To Capricorn (65.57.61.136) -- Friday, February 28 2003, 05:04 pm

Pay Back for "That Crying Baby."

Cap,

I can't pay you back, wouldn't try, I'm out classed and know it.

However, I can take you on a tense ride, If, you have the time. take a look at the poem, "Courage Of The Poet's Pen,"

MartinV
LinzAy (152.163.188.6) -- Thursday, March 13 2003, 10:03 am

......

I'm in there with Martin thinkin "child Abuse" but then thinking, well i'm pretty sure she wouldnt write something like that......so, lets see what comes of it!.......excellent piece of work!!! LOL...a chuckle is all i could muffle out right know, seeing thats it's fairly late (5:02) and i dont wanna wake the family..
Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Monday, March 24 2003, 04:48 pm

Thanks LinzAay

Thank you for your comment. I just don't know where the idea for this one came, but I wish I could think of some more the same way!! haha!!
LinzAy (152.163.188.166) -- Monday, March 24 2003, 09:21 pm

yup

Yea, i don't think i could ever think of anything this creative.....And to think of some more the same as this, if you do lemme know so i can check it out and laff again! hehehe
Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Monday, March 24 2003, 11:23 pm

LinzAy

I sure will let you know LinzAy...in fact i'll let the whole world know if I get that kind of inspiration again! Haha!
 
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