A Cut Too Deep
4 November, 2004
Author: Mike
The pale body lying on the floor,
Blood all over the walls and door.
Enormous gashes along it's wrists,
The arms a network of hideous slits.
It's eyes two orbs of unseeing black
As again and again the knife attacks.
The crimson fluid just gushing out,
Slowing to a trickle, then stopping - just about.
It is then that rigor motis kicks in
And the freezing of the body begins,
As free from the pain of endless lies
I finally watch as I slowly die.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Brunette (198.81.26.42) -- Monday, January 17 2005, 10:25 pm thats really sad |
| Nicole (67.136.121.12) -- Monday, February 7 2005, 04:22 am This poem....it pops out at me. It's really true in many ways. I love it!!! Nicole |
| Natali (Your random friend) (82.38.52.189) -- Tuesday, February 8 2005, 12:59 am I read through all of your poems in.. a random order.. hence why this one was last xP They speak to me in so many different ways, some of them even connect with me. I'd never really seen this side of you before, Mike. You're poems are, in their own way, beautiful.. Really well done, your writing is amazing. Natali xx |
| blade (168.221.27.195) -- Monday, February 14 2005, 07:45 pm wow this poem is very well writen!! |
| melissa (4.239.240.201) -- Thursday, February 24 2005, 11:23 pm that was a great poem i have never hear a poem like that you have a lot of insight and you should continue writing |
| Raimee (80.5.40.153) -- Monday, March 7 2005, 10:56 pm I feel like I should cry. I wish I hadn't read all this now, I'm just gonna work myself up. I still care about you, Mike. |
| marlene (69.225.222.139) -- Monday, March 7 2005, 11:18 pm WOW. that was great!!!!! i see where you are coming from i write alot of my poetry on cutting mostly on stories if not experience KEEP IT UP you are very talented!! -MaRlEnE |
| LBK (84.9.36.131) -- Saturday, March 12 2005, 12:06 am I hear what you are saying. I think there are other poems that you have expressed your feelings better though...:P...Sorry (A) |
| anonymous (141.168.28.235) -- Friday, April 1 2005, 05:35 am can i use ur poem? |
| Demon (66.212.40.133) -- Sunday, April 3 2005, 08:29 pm wow.... ur poem is amazing... you are a very talented writer... good luck and keep up the excellent work... |
| Britany (199.239.208.7) -- Monday, April 18 2005, 06:03 pm That was really really good. I mean really really good! Keep writtin they r great |
| Amber H (172.208.5.145) -- Monday, April 25 2005, 08:09 am I love this the feeling of knowing that its not just me thank you |
| Kami (12.72.106.134) -- Sunday, June 19 2005, 11:32 pm That is a very true thing |
| anna (24.17.111.85) -- Saturday, November 26 2005, 05:48 am wow. you are an amzing writer |
| Kami (4.240.36.15) -- Thursday, January 5 2006, 03:21 am I liked your poem Because I was at that point in one time or another |
| No One Special (207.200.116.195) -- Tuesday, January 24 2006, 03:38 pm I Like this poem it has a meanin to it. |
| broken child (152.163.100.5) -- Saturday, March 11 2006, 06:33 am I like your poetry, im so glad to know that im not alone keep up the good work |
| Puddin 2 (208.63.114.185) -- Monday, March 13 2006, 08:51 pm that is really deep i used to cut and i've made a couple poems about it but mine are no where as deep as this i love it great poem |
| anonymous (24.3.87.57) -- Monday, May 29 2006, 04:30 am this is the best poem i jave ever read |
| Korie Poleo (68.221.239.230) -- Wednesday, June 6 2007, 03:10 am hey i really enjoyed this poem i have a couple of mine on here about cuttin myself and this one is just really good. you are very talented and i hope that you have learned that writing makes it easier not to cut. Nice Job! |
| alicia (75.36.16.223) -- Monday, July 27 2009, 10:37 pm It is so good i like it so much i am a cutter myself so i understand |
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