Time by Mike

Time has no meaning,
It just goes on and on.
Bringing tomorrow after yesterday,
Making the loneliness grow strong.

If it were to stop
Would the loneliness die too?
Would we all have a friend to laugh with -
One each for me and you?

Vampyr Lost In Love (63.183.104.119) -- Thursday, November 4 2004, 11:30 pm

i love it
I LOVE THIS POEM....it says so much in so little...but it says everything....you should read my writtings i think you would like them

Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Friday, November 5 2004, 08:09 pm

Time ????
Good question "if time were to stop"
I like your words each one with thought

Stacey (69.137.26.123) -- Wednesday, November 17 2004, 02:55 pm

To Mike
simple yet complex. Excellent poem, definitely was a good read. :)

LBK (84.9.36.131) -- Saturday, March 12 2005, 12:10 am

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This poem gave me a headache. Me being thick again...BUT..."Would we all have a friend to laugh with" You will always have a friend to laugh with unless you are blocking them

Holly (82.34.160.81) -- Wednesday, April 6 2005, 10:40 pm

Really effective.
I really like this one. The shortness is so effectvie, as Vampyr said: "it says so much in so little". I think about stuff like this poem too. The shortness of the poem also feels like you're reading a life coming to an end, man I should have studied your poems for my English Lit GCSE. ;) How could they give me an A not A star? :P [gets over myself]

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