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How Much More
Author: Capricorn

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I feel so angry with my life!
God, why have you given such strife?
A little bit more and I will break.
Don't know how much I can take.

Already,I've had to cope with much.
Now my heart with stress is touched.
My spirit is beginning to break.
Don't know how much I can take.

Muscles rigid,mind in a spin,
sweat breaking out on my skin.
I feel as though I'll suffocate!
I know much more I cannot take.

All my life I've done my best,
but this is just the hardest test.
My heart has now begun to break.
I know much more I cannot take.

God if you are really there,
show me that you truly care.
I surely will completely break,
if much more I have to take.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (216.129.37.250) -- Thursday, February 13 2003, 12:28 am

oh god

Nice writing cap I'm sorry you've been tested but from what I see you must be a strong person and I believe you're never given anything you can't handle. I could never do what you do. thanks for sharing your feelings cap
Nicole (68.164.106.23) -- Thursday, February 13 2003, 05:40 pm

I like your poem

I like your poem a lot. You are one strong person! That's cool you think of it as a test. You have nice poems with nice ryming, I really like them=) I hope you have a good day, ~Katie(Nicole)
capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Friday, February 14 2003, 11:35 pm

Thanks Barb and katie

I feel better for venting! Thanks for your comments.
 
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