Paradise
7 November, 2004
Author: Tammy
Gently the wind touched my face,
and the leaves danced around me.
In the tall green grass I layed...
with my eyes focused on the clouds.
Listening to the song of the robin,
I quietly hummed his tune.
The fragrance of flowers floated
into the air.
I stared deep into the painted sky,
peace overtook my body.
And as my eyes closed heaven
softly kissed my lips.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Meridian (172.209.67.32) -- Sunday, November 7 2004, 11:51 pm Absolutely remarkable! I've been longing to see some poetry I love these days, when it feels like we are in Heaven at the moment! Paradise!!! Ahh! What a feeling! Geniune Tammy, just geniune! Smiley face, Meri |
| Meridian (172.209.67.32) -- Sunday, November 7 2004, 11:52 pm I meant, I've been longing to see some poetry from you again. I love these days-----" Sorry Tammy! Smiley face, Meri |
| Tammy (66.38.6.185) -- Monday, November 8 2004, 04:53 am Thank you for your comments.....I'm glad to hear you are up for some of my poetry... I have truly missed reading your work too!!!!!! |
| Dino (64.12.116.74) -- Monday, December 6 2004, 02:07 am I really like this poem Tammy. I wrote a similar poem called "Did you leave paradise" Yes, sometimes our paradise is right under our feet, and we don't even know it. My paradise is right in my back yard. Just looking up into the sky like you. Seeing the birds, clouds, forest, and my dog running around chasing squirrels and eating apples. Thanks for a wonderful poem, excuse me while I go sit in my paradise and listen to the water fall. Ah so nice! |
| Tammy (66.38.4.141) -- Monday, December 6 2004, 04:43 am Thank you so much for your wonderful comments on this poem.... |
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