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Flawless
Author: Aubrey

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A love that's so real
that I can instinctively feel
This time it's definite,
I know it's absolute.
I feel complete when I'm with you,
you're everything to me.
Perfection in its quintessence.
I know I should tell you how I feel,
but your flawlessness leaves me weak.
Silence is the enemy inside of my indemnity.
I'll keep it all inside
hoping love will find its way
Having you to talk to
will assuage my hurt and pain.
All that can keep us apart is time
and the hour glass sand is draining

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Comments on this poem/writing:

jim (152.163.100.197) -- Sunday, November 7 2004, 03:55 am

exactly!!

aubs....my exact thoughts perfectly conveyed. Stop reading my mind. Excellent poem., the man this poem is about is very lucky, make that extremely lucky. Keep writing, you'll gain many a fan on this site.
liz (164.116.22.138) -- Wednesday, June 4 2008, 05:31 pm

no way

this peom is how i feel about oh vnever mind im not going to get started but great peom
 
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