Gathering darkness as my friend
that covers me when I am alone,
still remembering those feelings
tearing my thoughts, every one,
shaking with fear and it's stronger
every moment I sense the presence of danger,
Death looming over me so often
like time just waiting in the moment,
hoping as I quicken my pace
that I will break and give my consent,
for them to take me away from this life
but I don't stop, I control the knife,
I am no longer trapped in this realm
I know what to do, and what is,
feeling the heat of a love I cannot have,
yet I hurt, I still watch and I miss,
what I know we could have entwined
if only, if only she would be mine.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Meridian (188.8.131.52) -- Wednesday, November 10 2004, 08:40 pm|
Hey Ruby! It's nice to see you up here again! What happened to ya? I'm glad to see another poem posted by the geniune man himself, "THE DRAGON SLAYER"! Pretty poem on forbidden love!
This reminds me of Adam and Eve, and the fruit! Loving something or someone, even though you know it's wrong, but you do it anyway, because of temptation, and because the picture looks enticing! Nicely done R.D.
|Clive (184.108.40.206) -- Wednesday, November 10 2004, 09:11 pm|
I like these words you thought out so well,
I agree with Meri on this,
A love so true yet out-of-bounds, but temptation is as bad as free-will, it will be done.
Thank you for writing and sharing
|HevansMisnAnAngel (220.127.116.11) -- Thursday, November 11 2004, 04:04 am|
Lovley, my friend. You must tell me where all this has come from. I am ready to read more.
|Brenda G (18.104.22.168) -- Thursday, November 11 2004, 11:42 pm|
I am not going to lie but I know how it feels wanting something so bad. It hurts doesn't I hope you didn't let it bring you down. There is more to life belive it or not. I know I am still trying to figure out how to get over the guy that i That I continue to love even though I never had him to my own. Well nice poem keep on writing.
|joyce Ivy (22.214.171.124) -- Friday, November 19 2004, 11:57 pm|
very well done RubyD...nice work here... forbidden love...such a heart break...to love one but never have them...to know they can never be yours...a torment inside itself...
|bobbi (126.96.36.199) -- Monday, March 17 2008, 06:53 pm|
to know if i can use the poem for a school project.
i am doing a poetry anthology and mine is on forbidden love. i am looking deeply into this project and would just love to use the poem.:)
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