Take A Number....wait Your Turn...
11 November, 2004
Author: Terrie*
take a number
sit your weary self down
you'll notice your always number one
as the red carpet is rolled out
so take this time to do something
good for yourself
breath in......
and exhale it out..
before too long this young lady
will be holding your heart
in this life we lose many
yet our gain is too numerous to keep track
we sit and chat with a friend about our grief
we sit and chat about our love and all that we believe
take my word this young lady
has been on that flight when turbulance hit
and struck those that she loved
they say that Angels exist through the eyes of faith
and faith gives us that knowledge
to understand and observe by experiencing it
and once she has touched your life
you walk away with an attitude
that says hey I'm alive
and then you will truly know
that you have experienced an Angels touch
yet she lost the very one
that she loved
the one whom had that inner connection
the one well known as mum
she lives on to share what she lost
because through her loss she has gained
the knowledge
that she must share the love
that was placed in her care
we can not in this life hold tightly to a love
we must share it beyond many souls
that are unable to rest
because they have never felt that touch before
so yes she on the other hand shares her best
no other than my friend
well known as
an Angel we call
JOYCE....
------- Author's Notes -------
For you my friend.... |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Thursday, November 11 2004, 04:15 pm Very nice does not cover these words you write, Joyce a special friend with lots of talent too, you have done a really talented job in writing this one Terrie |
| joyce ivy (68.222.112.57) -- Thursday, December 9 2004, 08:02 pm Terrie this is a very touching and beautiful poem you wrote for me..I think you over rated me a little...LOL... but it is beatuiful and very well written...I thank you from my heart and soul..my very special friend " Terrie"...Brought tears to my eyes..I am very glad you like my poetry...as I do yours and so many more here...thank you very much...joyce |
| Glynn (64.12.116.197) -- Thursday, December 9 2004, 10:47 pm This is a very special poem.Thank you for careing. |
| Terrie* (65.148.211.18) -- Thursday, December 9 2004, 11:39 pm just continue to be the angel that you are, continue your love for people. a friend that tuned in to read all that i wrote pointed this one out when he e-mailed me personally and i never really thought about it but it is true "your love does recruit many angels " glad you liked it, the tears were proof that someone else was touched by you... |
| Terrie* (65.148.211.18) -- Thursday, December 9 2004, 11:44 pm or any form of poetry....is when, someone else can feel the wings of an angel , because they are the ones that bring words we deliver to the world through the existence of their caring heart.. thank you for your endearing comment..it means so much to me...for you to express from your heart... |
| Jenny (216.79.246.77) -- Friday, December 10 2004, 12:45 am Thank you Terrie for acknowledging an angel. Very beautiful poem. I am glad to see Joyce having so many caring friends...Jenny (Joyce's sister) |
| Sonya (205.188.116.197) -- Friday, December 10 2004, 03:53 pm It is wonderful to know that we all have good friends in this world that we can lean on when we have to. This poem is very sweet, and I think you too are an angel for writing it. |
| joyce ivy (68.222.91.124) -- Friday, December 10 2004, 04:59 pm I very much agree with you... Terrie is an angel..even if she hadn't written this poem for me..I would have told you she was an angel...Their are many angels here...just read their poetry and you will see...but Terrie is a special angel here and her poetry is great...And thank you again Terrie...Hope you don't mind I copied it so I can frame it...thanks so much..for the poem and taking the time to read my poetry...and thank you Sonya for your comment's...it is a lovely poem... your friend... joyce |
| joyce ivy (68.222.91.124) -- Friday, December 10 2004, 05:04 pm Thank you all for taking the time to read and comment on Terrie's Poem...it is a lovely piece... |
| Terrie* (65.148.208.123) -- Saturday, December 11 2004, 12:24 am thank you both so much for your inspiring comment, you all are the ornaments of beauty and glory at this sight, in this life we stay for a while and move on.. we all have something to offer one another, we need not know some one by name to remember them for their kindness, we need not see them, but feel them only through to their heart...for the heart as they say has eyes that the mind knows nothing of... SONYA, thank you so much Doll..the saying is TRUE it Takes a REAL ANGEL to spot another... now i feel so much closer to earning my wings for entertaining many ANGELS.. |
| Terrie* (65.148.208.123) -- Saturday, December 11 2004, 12:28 am i'm not gonna leave you way up there at the top except for being my top fan........thank you so much sweetie for your comments they always form a soft spot in my heart... you and i know people to well... (whispering) thank you.. |
| joyce ivy (68.222.91.124) -- Saturday, December 11 2004, 07:01 pm It is great Terrie...Thank you... Terrie Clive will forgive us...I left him hanggin on top of one of my poems also...lol..but I know our friend forgives...he has that type of heart...thank you for my poem.... your friend... Joyce |
| poisonivy60 (216.77.193.204) -- Tuesday, September 12 2006, 04:36 am Hello Terri...haven't been here in a while....just wanted to say this is still a beautiful poem... |
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