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Depression
Author: Capricorn

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A mist of depression surrounds my soul,
causing my mind to be confused,
my heavy heart does not feel whole,
deep inside I feel battered and bruised.

Wish I could cast off this melancholy mood,
brush it aside like a speck of dust.
Whatever I try does no good
continue with this heavy heart I must.

What has caused this pain to swell,
within my soul like a poisoned sore?
my thoughts so confused I cannot tell,
why my emotions are so raw.

I begin to shed a multitude of tears,
which cleanses my soul and feelings,
and slowly the mist begins to clear,
my mind once blurred starts healing.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

The Geezer (67.26.86.132) -- Thursday, January 9 2003, 08:10 pm

Nicely done

I really like how you laid out this poem, your words, and deep feelings. Thanks Cap for sharing your nice poem, and I'm glad you are feeling better. Take care now, see ya!
Luc (67.37.233.26) -- Thursday, January 9 2003, 10:34 pm


i like the rythem here.. the abab pattern.. nice .. and the way you said everything.. i relation between this and me i see... then the last stanza .. mmhmmm very nice
barb (66.46.230.159) -- Friday, January 10 2003, 01:21 am

holy

very good cap I really like reading your writings so much feeling. your writings show your moods,which is good.I'm not a doctor but maybe the hype of the holidays got you all excited. and now it's all over.
nicole (66.167.40.100) -- Friday, January 10 2003, 02:17 am

i like it

nice poem..i really like it
martin vann (65.56.173.61) -- Friday, January 10 2003, 10:12 pm

none

There is a place within yourself
that frees you from your worldly cares

It took me years to find this place
come with me, I'll take you there

As you can see, there are no walls
and everyone that you will meet

Has a smile and knows your name
its not a dream, your not asleep

I say to you, this place in mine!
it gives me more than worldly wealth

And if you care, to take the time
You'll find this place, within yourself
Capricorn (62.31.144.1) -- Friday, January 10 2003, 10:52 pm

Thank you

Thankyou martin, that was really lovely, and touched my heart! I will remember that!! I hope you'll post some of your work soon.
LinzAy (205.188.208.70) -- Wednesday, March 26 2003, 07:09 am

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Just read this one, obviously....and i love it! excellent piece of work!
Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Wednesday, March 26 2003, 09:28 pm

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Wrote it how I felt at the time!
 
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