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Written By The Tears Of My Heart...
11 November, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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my heart cries
out in pain between the sighs
with the thought of losing you
my heart chokes
it stops pumping
it stops beating
of never knowing yours

I try to hide
from the deep deep pain
that is only known in my heart
can you feel this pain that
circles around your soul
as my thoughts of losing you puts out?

I write these words
from the tears that are mine
that rise from deep in my heart
as they fall they become a part of you

I go back to sleep
and dream you once a gain
hoping the pain will fade away

I reclaim what hasn't been
as I allow myself to dream
that unshared moment
with the blood of my tears
as they return to restore my life
you are the pulsating part of our heart

I wake up once again
realizing it was all a nightmare
pretending to be a dream
by threatening my heart

my soul doesn't feel suffocated anymore
it has returned to safety
feeling the heat of your soul
it sends mine to dance with such Glory and praise...

------- Author's Notes -------

how i'd feel if life ...pulled us apart...the pain would be unbearable...it would shred my soul...i love you too much...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Saturday, November 13 2004, 07:52 pm

they are lucky

This person is so lucky to have a love in you,
whom ever they maybe
joyce Ivy (68.19.140.52) -- Sunday, November 21 2004, 08:11 am

I agree with Clive

he is very lucky Terrie...I feel your pain in your poems...great job
Terrie* (65.148.207.14) -- Friday, December 17 2004, 10:56 pm

Clive, my friend...

your words are too deep. thank you. your words in my heart i shall keep. HUGS/LOVE.Always.
Terrie* (65.142.64.156) -- Friday, December 17 2004, 11:08 pm

Joyce, thank you sweetie....

the LUCKY one is my love has been i. i know how deep the pain goes. the pain would BITE. thanx for commentin'/readin'..
 
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