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Death Note
14 November, 2004
Author: Fallen_Angel

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hit replay
and listen to your voice
let it play
inside my mind
so I can tell myself you wont leave me behind
to many tears one more fear
two feet from a brake down
and I'm alone here
no reply no response
Just a message and a letter
and I relive it as you tell me it'll be better
hello,you aren't listening,I'm talking back
but you just say the same thing
are you there,I can hear you
I'm the perfect girl remember?
The one with the perfect father
no everything's okay,just hit replay
and let your voice wash against my pain
and take it away
but one problem it isn't working
the memories are braking
and I know you don't believe me
I'm the liar with a knife
the girl you think is so beautiful
if only you could see my legs in the light
how the cuts mark the agony he put me threw
hit replay reread
no one can say
how much I am in need
nothing can save me
Because I'm the one whose wrong
no its gods fault for placing me some where I don't belong
The girl who cried pain,the girl who cried agony
I'm the one in need,broken apart and everything
never lied,when I wasn't but still no ones here to save me
razor blades calling
and a bottle of pills sitting
amongst the seat
hit replay listen to your voice again
run my fingertips amongst my mouth
this is goodbye my dear
I'm tired of being here
another tear amongst my face
last time I'll hit replay
just so I can hear your voice
to tell you, I.
I love you and goodbye
Last time I reread
Septembers letter
because I know it wont it better
just so I can write you a
death note you may never receive.
"Goodbye,and..one last thing..
Promise you'll miss me."

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Rubydragon (82.10.190.131) -- Wednesday, December 1 2004, 06:54 pm

Another

Another one that has captured me again. The more I read your work the harder it is for me to stop reading it.
Mallisa (24.119.116.127) -- Thursday, December 2 2004, 01:31 am

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Hehe thanks rubydragon.
 
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