Control by Crush Me

There is no control in life
Every thing goes by so fast
I just can't stop it
Spining way out of control
Embarsssment, love, hate
All my emotions cluttering my thoughts
Until I can do nothing more then cry
Cry out for the help that is not there
I have crossed the very delicate
Line that seperates
Pleasure from hell
My world I fear
Is falling apart
Colapsing in on it's self
Every thing I have worked for
Every thing I have done
Is wrong or turning agsinst me
My life feels like a rollercoaster
That has recently flown far off of
It's tracks
Sending me flying off
With no control whatsoever
Just what am I supposed to do?

Rex (76.19.165.201) -- Friday, April 4 2008, 12:28 am

well,
i really understand this poem. this was way awesome. u did a good job expressing yourself.

Emily (166.109.0.154) -- Friday, April 18 2008, 03:14 pm

sorry
i am very sorry that you feel this way, but good poem

Jackie (166.109.0.154) -- Friday, April 18 2008, 03:16 pm

blah
you did a good job, but i hope you feel better

LinzAy (72.189.15.210) -- Monday, April 21 2008, 05:27 am

...
Right there with you. Just hold on tight, the ride will get smooth and get back on track to just those twists and turns that we know we can handle without a tear. I can't believe that we don't run out of tears to cry, how often and how much they can flow. Be happy, wear a smile and believe in it. Good writing.

Caity (123.211.115.168) -- Tuesday, February 24 2009, 08:21 am

I was wondering
I have a drama performance about control and i would love to use your poem in it. I tried to copy it but i was told to ask you? Thank you

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