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Who's There?
Author: Capricorn

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What's happening in this house just now?
The T.V.'s turned up high
Loud music's blaring out upstairs
Heavy footsteps of some guy
Food's disappearing from the fridge
Dishes piled in the sink
Boxes, cases everywhere
Am I happy with what's going on here?
My son's home from Uni
-What do you think!!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (206.191.91.213) -- Friday, December 13 2002, 06:49 pm

very good cap

I think it's called life. Having your son home is like getting life back. I liked the way you describe it ,you can tell you're happy to have him home even with all the kayos.
Capricorn (62.30.192.1) -- Saturday, December 14 2002, 11:51 am

Home

Both my sons are home today Barb, and it feels good!!
ashley (unknown) -- Wednesday, May 21 2003, 06:48 pm

this was a crap poem

this was the most stupid poem i have ever read in my life
RinRin (24.25.61.26) -- Wednesday, May 21 2003, 08:46 pm

okay...

well i thought it was lovely! i think cap did a WONDERFUL job...good going cap! and don't listen to out-of-turn comments that don't deserve paying attention to mkay? you're a beautiful writer, and always will be!

*RinRin*
 
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