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Not Ready To Die
Author: Tangerine

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Im So Young Im Not Ready To Die
Seems Way To Soon For Me To Say Goodbye

Im So Scared, I dont Wanna Go
But I'll Hold My Pain In, Wont Ever Let It Show

I Know Soon I'll Be Taking My Last Breath
But God Please Tell Me What Happens After Death

Im Terrifed To Be Lowered Deep Into The Ground
Burried There Forever Never To Make Another Sound

Please Lord Dont Leave Me Down There All Alone
Send The Angels To Come An Take Me Home

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Comments on this poem/writing:

joyce Ivy (68.19.140.52) -- Saturday, November 20 2004, 04:29 pm

There's A Place For Everyone In Heaven

Very good writing here...you got your emotions across well..like this piece...even though it's sad...And if it's true...then remember there's a place in heaven for everyone...if your right with God...Something to think about...love your work...
tangerine (64.12.116.197) -- Saturday, November 20 2004, 08:12 pm

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Thanks Joyce Ivy I'm Glad You Liked It.Yes Unfortunatly It Is True . I Am Sick But Theres Still Some Hope So You Never Know Maybe I'll Be Ok Huh. I'll Keep My Fingers Crossed. Thanks For The Comment I Appreciate It.God Bless
joyce Ivy (68.19.140.52) -- Sunday, November 21 2004, 06:49 am

Very sorry Tang...

There's always hope...hang on to life...never let go...you are in my prayers...
Britney (67.136.91.44) -- Friday, November 26 2004, 05:02 pm

Aww it was a great poem

Hey it was a great pome don't worry i'm sur eyou will be ok......in my prayers also britney
Faith (216.167.226.93) -- Friday, November 26 2004, 07:23 pm

I love your poem

This poem really touched home for me. I have cancer and I know what it is like to be scared. Always remember to keep your faith and hold your head up high. You will be in my prayers.
Hugs,
Faith
Terrie* (65.148.202.243) -- Friday, November 26 2004, 09:09 pm

Tangerine, your words rattled my heart...

the wotds were so deep and penetrating to the core... i have many friends witk a variety of illnesses and time for thim i will always have, cause once one is gone from this life that void can never be replaced..i am saddend to hear that you have such an illness..yes just keep hope in your heart.. you and Faith above are in my prayers..when you have a chance read a poem i wrote for a friend "undying love"

HUGS/LOVE....God Bless...
Martin Vann (67.234.27.56) -- Friday, November 26 2004, 09:21 pm

Not Your Call, God will tell you when to come home

Tangerine,

If, you speak to God, ther is NO death. Continue on with the love of his life, in this world! When it is time, God, will call you, that is not your call!

So, live until he calls, then, you can really, live.

Love your poem,

MV
tangerine (64.12.116.197) -- Sunday, November 28 2004, 09:48 am

Thank You All

I havent been home this week and i returned to see all your comments thank you so much for the well wishes and prayers in truely touches my heart.For terrie* i read undying love im so sorry ive been there ive lost many it hurts in a million ways and it never goes away just you learn to accept that there gone as life continus and will see them again one day .All are loved ones lost will be there when are time comes to carry us home.God Bless you all Thank You Again
 
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