If It's Not Emotional
Author: Mental


who are you
going to touch?
how do you know
it's real?
if it's not emotional
how can it feel?
whose going
to touch your dreams
in the deep moonlight
broken memories at the seems
say goodnight.
whose going to hear
the streaming of a tear?
after the fall
winter frozen
after thaw.
never knowing
where to land
find out your alright
and on your two feet you stand


Comments on this poem/writing:

Stacey ( -- Monday, November 22 2004, 12:54 am

I really liked this one

Great writing Mental !!
mental ( -- Monday, November 22 2004, 01:26 am

to stacey from mental

thank you very much
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