Still Here
21 November, 2004
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)
Are you there yet
I still feel you near
Obvious signs to me
Telling me you are here
No, you cannot speak to me
The way you used to do
But I hear you easily
Wandering my thoughts..It's you
In the quiet of the silence
You are here with me
I close my eyes and picture you
Gently swinging there.. by the tree
I feel you take my hand as you said you would
And we talk.. speaking in my mind
You remind me your not God
Just now an essence of a different kind
I ask "will you always be here"
You answer "I don't know
But Becky, I am here right now"
So I sit listening... quietly within my soul
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| joyce Ivy (68.19.140.52) -- Sunday, November 21 2004, 07:56 am I feel every word of your poem...it's how i feel about my mom...great job |
| Stacey (69.137.26.123) -- Monday, November 22 2004, 01:51 am Becky, you are so talented. This poem is absolutely amazing. It really touched me. Something very peaceful about it and i enjoyed it so much i read it several times. :) |
| lauren (24.60.123.250) -- Wednesday, March 16 2005, 08:38 pm this poem makes me think of this kid named rob and how he told me he would be there and it makes me cry cause i think about all the nice and bad times we had it is a lovely poem and you are very talented |
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