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Sometimes...
Author: Terrie*

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sometimes
when I speak the truth
of my heart I find myself
being loved by you

so...I never hold back my love..

sometimes
when I speak the truth
of my heart I find myself
all alone and crying for you

but, I never hold back my love..

sometimes
this confuses me
and I never understand

yet, I never hold back my love..

sometimes
I hold back my words
sometimes
I hold back my tears

but...I never hold back my love..

sometimes
I never know what to say
sometimes
I am so afraid of pushing you away

still....I never hold back my love..

sometimes
I wonder what I should do
sometimes
I wonder if it is enough just loving you

still... I never hold back my love..

sometimes
I wonder if you want much more
sometimes
I just wonder....

and no question about it
I continue loving you..

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (67.136.91.44) -- Saturday, November 27 2004, 12:35 am

Cute poem

I thought that was such a sweet and cool poem...Britney
Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Monday, November 29 2004, 02:47 pm

Love it

Hold back the words that say so much,
Never do this for that word you hold may be the word that's needed,
Holding back your tears,
Let them flow, then I'll see the real you,
Love this one as I do them all
Terrie* (65.150.167.208) -- Thursday, December 2 2004, 05:02 pm

Britney, thank you...

i really appreciate you making time to read/comment ..it means alot knowing that you found it to be a cool sweet poem...
Terrie* (65.150.167.208) -- Thursday, December 2 2004, 05:08 pm

Clive, thank you...your so special ..

my number one fan...everytime you read me..you do see the real me...in black and white... i always look forward to your pleasing comments..they are ever-so calming ..to a rugged day...thanx
 
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