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Awkward Silence
Author: Cookey

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Have you ever lived a moment
That consisted of not much
Of few seconds of stability
Then an hour without touch
Jus two faces sitting awkwardly
Glaring at the moon
Wishing with all their hearts
That one would make a move
A long ten minutes pass
One shuffles their feet
Reaches out their hand
But then quickly retreats
What they want is jus dangling there
They can reach out and receive
But self consciousness is quite unfair
And makes the awkwardness complete
The silence is almost deafening
No one can hear a thing
Jus thoughts and emotions running wild
Around, around again

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Comments on this poem/writing:

joyce ivy (68.222.110.4) -- Sunday, December 5 2004, 08:25 am

cool poem

lived these moments....good poem
Aj (67.123.218.164) -- Monday, December 6 2004, 06:15 am

Well done!

Very nicely put as well accurate, good work! love to read more.
mental (66.153.163.194) -- Friday, December 10 2004, 01:05 am

mentals comment

ah memories of younger years ( sigh)
anonymous (192.168.0.8) -- Monday, August 15 2005, 03:39 pm

Oh! my Gosh!

Just typical of me...Keep it up. Good poem!
nice one (98.246.18.41) -- Sunday, April 12 2009, 07:25 am

captures me

thats so me dude
batman (198.20.32.1) -- Monday, January 4 2010, 06:15 pm

SVP

ahh can i use this for my english project.. its a good example of an awkward poem.
Puppet (69.181.45.166) -- Wednesday, January 6 2010, 07:59 pm

i like this

This is a simple poem, but is strong because of that. I like it a lot!
gaurav (59.177.76.224) -- Saturday, September 11 2010, 09:44 pm

love it

love it
pinkk (68.10.240.69) -- Thursday, October 7 2010, 01:09 am

its amazing

ITS amazing!!!
 
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