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Where Love Can Be Found...
3 December, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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an illusion placed in my mind
an illusion only my heart can find
a tapestry of great desire
a sensation only known as love
a love so hard to describe

the aroma of a lovers dream
a visionary sillhouette
the perfection of the canvass
of an artists joy of escape
to a mountain top
or besides the oceans tides

my heart bound in your safety
you are not here by my side
but the view from where I am
I can see your reflection
as I gaze straight up into the midnight sky
and admire the lovers moon high above

my heart skips a beat
totally melting my heart
as you literally take my breath away

the stars dancing
as heavens joyful tears drift slowly down
each passing season
holds more meaning
every time the lovers moon appears

that is where the reflection
and the fragrance
of our love can be found
as love was always meant to be..

i never felt such happiness before
i just want to look up to the sky and cry

and let my heart melt into the vapors of the night
until it meets up with you
and together our hearts
become one

------- Author's Notes -------

only YOU can spell-bound me like this ..

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Princess Moon (168.53.173.138) -- Friday, December 3 2004, 10:24 pm

Looove it!

I enjoyed your poem so much Terrie! Man, do you know how to write. Every line was so visionary, so imaginative, so dreamy. "the stars dancing, as heavens tears drift slowly down"-pure art! Absolutely lovely. I wish I'd thought of it! lol Totally awesome job Terrie, don't stop writing and I won't stop reading!~PM
joyce ivy (68.222.110.4) -- Sunday, December 5 2004, 09:31 am

Very nice Terrie

another beautiful poem Terrie..love reading your poems...glad your back...
Terrie* (65.148.230.174) -- Wednesday, December 8 2004, 10:02 pm

Princess Moon, your comment made my soul smile..

I can not tell a lie love made me do it believe me Doll i plan on being in love for a very long time so you will have plenty of old poems and new one to read thank you for your lovely words
Terrie* (65.148.230.174) -- Wednesday, December 8 2004, 10:09 pm

Joyce, thank you...

makes me smile knowing that you enjoy my poetry..
i'm never far..have family and loved ones that need a bit more of "ME"....inbetween "WORK" have many poems aside just not posting as much as before ..i do try to make time for my writings and feelings..
joyce ivy (65.12.35.192) -- Thursday, January 6 2005, 02:50 pm

Terrie

i have read this one...and love does take your beath away..as your hearts become one....beautiful work Terrie....joyce
Terrie* (65.148.209.36) -- Thursday, January 6 2005, 06:38 pm

Joyce thank you for re-readin' /feelin' r 1 he

yes when i lost my first love to death...it was a rude wake up call, now i love even deeper than before..and love # 2 has opened up many doors by waking up my heart..
God i love this man so deeply...
 
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