vinebar

The Real Me
Author: Mike

vinebar

Nobody knows how I feel inside
As all my emotions I struggle to hide.
If you look deep down into my eyes
You will see where my tortured thoughts lie.

With every breath, the tears will rise,
But I swallow them back, slip into my disguise.
A brace face is what everyone sees
But nobody sees the 'real me'.

I'm hiding inside myself.. Somewhere.
Inside my hollow heart, I'm there,
Waiting for my reality to change,
Waiting to rid myself of this rage.

But from what I see now, this will take time.
Things cannot go from bad to fine.
So in the meantime, I slip on my mask
And say "I'm okay" to anyone who asks.

vinebar

Comments on this poem/writing:

scurrd (4.27.47.4) -- Sunday, December 5 2004, 02:25 am

no title

great ryhmes
flowed good
clapity clapity clap clap
joyce ivy (68.222.110.4) -- Sunday, December 5 2004, 08:33 am

Great poem Mike

I can relate to your feelings here...very well written....
Julie (81.108.116.172) -- Sunday, December 26 2004, 07:40 pm

Life is hard

I understand where you are coming from! People dont take time to know each other truly and its sad. The poem is great, alot of people will be able to relate to this. Good job
LBK (84.9.36.131) -- Friday, March 11 2005, 11:38 pm

...

First paragraph/stanza or whatever you wanna call it is not true. I may not know what you feel exactly but I have an idea...I'm sorry I have never done anything. I don't know what to do. Help me help you.
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

Comment Title:

Comment / Ammendment:

Please complete the recaptcha below for spam prevention:

Click here to read other Poems by Mike

vinebar

Poetic Dreams Other's Poetic Dreams Submit a Poem New This Week Forum Home

Copyright©2017-1999 by Rebecca R. Hammack

COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved.   No part of this website, including all pictures and written words,  may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without  permission of the original author of the work.  All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner.  All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail: dreamer@dreamersreality.com  so the proper person may be notified.