i didn't know
what to do
why did you
make me so blue?
the sun never shined
i didn't know what to say
just another dark day.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|joyce ivy (18.104.22.168) -- Sunday, December 5 2004, 06:31 am|
they seem to linger on...good poem...
|rage (22.214.171.124) -- Friday, September 6 2013, 10:24 pm|
perfect a big emotion narrowed down to a few lines excellent.
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