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Morning View
Author: Mental

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Morning view
i didn't know
what to do
why did you
make me so blue?
the sun never shined
i didn't know what to say
oh nevermind
just another dark day.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

joyce ivy (68.222.110.4) -- Sunday, December 5 2004, 06:31 am

these days can be dark

they seem to linger on...good poem...
rage (66.153.240.162) -- Friday, September 6 2013, 10:24 pm

ha you know it

perfect a big emotion narrowed down to a few lines excellent.
 
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