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Spread You Wings And Fly
Author: Capricorn

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Now it is time to spread your wings
And do so many different things
I feel so sad to see you go
But it has to be this way ,I know

Although at times you've caused me strife
You've brought such happiness to my life
And my life, as well as yours will change
Each day seeming a little strange

I am so proud that you are mine
And hope that you will spend your time
Happily and with wisdom, until we meet again
And life will just continue until then

So fly now from this nest
Fly away, and do your best
To make your life what it can be
And sometimes, when you have time
-think of me!

------- Author's Notes -------

Dedicated to my son who has reccently left home to go to Uni.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Seizure (68.155.201.220) -- Wednesday, November 6 2002, 12:20 am

nice.

That was a very well written poem for your recently left son. He's lucky.
barb (206.191.91.233) -- Wednesday, November 6 2002, 12:56 am

It's hard

letting them leave is hard it was just my daughter and I for 10 years when she left even the arguments I missed.Now it would be hard to have her come back and live but the doors always open. very good Cap. expressed it very well
anonymous (67.36.189.78) -- Wednesday, November 6 2002, 03:41 am

superb

its nice to see people dedicating their poems to some one very close to them. or to anyone for that matter. i really like that last stanza lovely. wheres uni anyways if you dont mind my asking?
Luc (67.36.189.78) -- Wednesday, November 6 2002, 03:43 am

hmm

i seem to be forgetting more things then usual now a days. just yesterday i forgot my own name. :S i think im getting old timers though i seriously doubt tat since im only about 15. thats me up there. with the title superb.
Capricorn (62.30.192.1) -- Wednesday, November 6 2002, 09:35 am

To anonyous

Thankyou for your comments - they have made me feel even more proud!! My son is at Nottingham Uni in U.K. I really misshim!
 
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