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I Ask.....
Author: Terrie*

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as I sit here on the front porch
glimpsing at every raindrop that falls
and pours down from the sky

I make love to every single drop
that falls and splashes upon me

I asked myself deep down in my heart

if you had no sex to offer me
could I still love you as much as I do?
would I still want you too?

I didn't hesitate..
I said yes I do...

the love in my heart is so real
something I feel in my gut
and it isn't lust
if it was I'm sure I would know
and I would tell you so

with so much meaning to my heart
I thought for a moment
how about you?

if I was like a raindrop
seeking shelter in your arms
would you take me in
and let me melt into your heart?


how do you feel towards me
do i truly satisfy...

your heart???
with just the touch
of my heart???

------- Author's Notes -------

i found out the answer was yes...
and that means more than words could ever say...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Wednesday, December 8 2004, 02:22 am

they are lucky

you and he are too lucky in everyway,
My warmth is with you two.
Loved your words Terrie as I always do
Sarah A (137.73.86.113) -- Wednesday, December 8 2004, 02:28 am

Terrie

such a beautiful poem. i have read a few of them and it always amazes me at how you can switch on your monitor and allow such sweet, beautiful and meaningful words flow through your fingertips. thank you for sharing them with us.
Terrie* (65.148.230.174) -- Wednesday, December 8 2004, 08:51 pm

Clive, the lucky one is "I'

thank you....i feel the sincerity of your warmth...

and...i love your comments..as i always do...
Terrie* (65.148.230.174) -- Wednesday, December 8 2004, 08:54 pm

Sarah A, your too kind...

i blame it on love for my Monitor being in the right Mode....and for the perfect words to flow ...this happens when it is felt in the heart...

thank you for readin'/commentin'........
joyce ivy (68.222.91.220) -- Thursday, December 9 2004, 09:38 am

So True Terrie

Terrie this is truely a beautiful poem...true love is wonderful..thanks for sharing...
Terrie* (65.148.233.225) -- Friday, January 7 2005, 05:28 pm

thank you Joyce...

true love...is where the heart is...no lies no disguise.. two passionate hearts ready to share oor heart w/the world...he is the raindrop absorbing in my flesh..he is my waking hour as well as my rest in between..he is what i call TRUE LOVE...thanx for readin'/commentin'...it means a lot to me.....
 
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