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Hate
8 December, 2004
Author: Babygirl420

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Hate is so powerful,
so destrutive and unsure.
Hate is never desired,
hate is never pure.
To hate is to end an existance,
to hate is to live without chance.
Please be careful when you use hate,
you have to be precise,
Hate can never love,
hate is not kind or nice.
To hate is to live in pure sorrow,
to belive hate can end, makes a better tomorrow.
Hate is so evil,
hate is a sin.
Father please forgive me,
I HATE EVERYONE!

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joyce ivy (68.222.91.124) -- Sunday, December 12 2004, 07:50 pm

No you don't babygirl420

I don't believe you hate...thats why you write...so you don't hate...your right hate is a strong word...evil right sin yes...you've got it down pat...except the last line...no one can hate everyone...well written though...you put a lot of feeling in this piece...thanks for sharing..
 
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