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All Alone
14 December, 2004
Author: Mike

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I've done it again, I thought I'd stopped.
All my plans have seemed to have flopped.
I tried to be different, tried to change
But it seems all my efforts have been in vain.

I wasted my breath while I tried to convince
Everyone I was ok while still dropping hints.
These hints went unnoticed, all were ignored
And all the while by the pain I was ganwed.

Now I'm alone, I have nothing left
So I stick to what I think I know best -
Writing what I feel on a piece of paper
And hoping that in time these feelings will waver.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Sweet Sara (216.39.188.162) -- Tuesday, December 14 2004, 11:08 pm

mike

i agree. the best way i get my feelings out is writing them since the people i have around me are ignorants and dont see what i go through every day. i liked this poem a lot. i hope ur not alone for long.
Raimee (80.5.40.153) -- Monday, March 7 2005, 08:27 pm

soz, lmao.

"All my plans have seemed to have flopped."
LMAO SORRY. That makes me laugh.
"Argh dude, the plan flopped."
LMAO.
Nice poem tho, k.
LBK (84.9.36.131) -- Saturday, March 12 2005, 12:55 am

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I'm sorry, I hear your screams for help, but I don't know what to do. Don't drop hints...tell me what you want
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

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