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Sixth Sense Of Love
Author: J Freedom Long

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Better am I because of you,
Better are you because of me,
Knowing sixth sense of love
is greater love for two.

Hearing our inner joy,
is more than laughter.
Seeing our inner beauty,
is more than beauty.
Touching our caring hearts,
is more than touching.
Tasting our kisses,
is more than kissing.
Speaking our words of love,
is more than mere words.
Knowing sixth sense of love
is our magic synergy.

Better am I because of you,
Better are you because of me,
Knowing sixth sense of love
is greater love for two.

------- Author's Notes -------

Pondering on how love is synergetic...someting greater than two to cause a sixth sense of love... something far beyond physical senses of hearing, seeing, touching, tasting or speaking. Where there is love, one plus one is more than two. Synergy!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Wednesday, December 15 2004, 06:13 pm

love is more when shared with love

Tell you Mr.J you have a way of putting across a view we too much take for granted,
Great writing
Meridian (172.132.22.234) -- Wednesday, December 15 2004, 07:03 pm

Great Analogy You Have There!

J Freedom Long, my hat goes off to you! Synergy was beyond my vocabulary that I had to go to dictionary.com to look it up! I like when you say, love goes beyond the physical, and the five senses. True love is more than touchy-feely, eye-contact, and smooches. Your poem title reminds me of the movie, "The Sixth Sense", starring Bruce Willis and Haley Joel Osment, when he didn't have to feel or see dead people to know that they were there. But like an animal, he had instincts, and that's what love is all about----instinct. Believe it or not, there are different perceptions as to how we see love. Great job JFL!

Super J Freedom Long!
Smiley face,
Meri
Terrie* (65.136.7.107) -- Thursday, December 16 2004, 02:20 am

JFL,i believe i've become addicted to your words

yes... i am a weak soul..capturing your words like dust of gold...i can take words like this to bed with me and wake up in a rather passionate mood...as i listen to my loves heart speak to mine..while our souls pacify our loving thoughts..great words...
joyce ivy (68.19.179.10) -- Tuesday, December 21 2004, 03:36 pm

WOW Jerry (JFL)

your word bring beauty to the word love...a great love for two...love that...beautiful write Jerry
love your words...thanks for sharing...
joyce
J Freedom Long (141.154.75.96) -- Tuesday, December 21 2004, 04:46 pm

Thanks Joyce

Thanks so much, Joyce..... for your words that bring synergy too...since I admire your poetry very much and ...we seem to be in synergetic synchronicity (huh?) May we both do our dreams in poems and realities. Mahalo! (thanks) Jerry
 
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