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Take My Words, Take Me
16 December, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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take my words
place them in the palm of your hand
blow a kiss and follow where they go
as they softy float in the air
with your heart in the lead

a sparkle of care in every letter
a dust of sincerity
all because I love you..

how will you know?

close your eyes
open your heart
can you feel the passion
that drains from my soul?

listen to the whisper
of every word I softly speak
tenderly into your ear

can you feel the warmth
as your embraced with my words
can you not feel the magic as
each one glides on wings,?

the magical hug
the color of a ligament pulling
a phenomenal passion of a muscle tightening
and bravely surrounding
the biggest part of my soul

you have become
a part of my mind
a part of my flesh

one word will explain a lot
if you take the time
to observe
what I express

no matter how short
or how long
be they simple or strong

each one of my words
can lead you deep
into the heart of my soul

your love holds and fills
my once empty heart

your passion glows with a breathtaking tenderness
being without you
drives me insane
so heartbreaking
listen to the cry of my heart

i need you
for my hands to touch and hold
not so much your flesh
but your heart
that i fell in love with
from the very start

when you fueled the fire in my heart
and made me a woman soooo complete

------- Author's Notes -------

my heart continues to cry ...how much longer must i wait???

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Friday, December 17 2004, 01:03 am

Love to love these words

Such love within you and all to give, Such passion that stirs for you that special soul, With words you write a picture of pleasure, For you and him ?
Terrie* (65.148.211.254) -- Friday, January 7 2005, 07:31 am

Thank you Clive....

your words are special and soft to the heart..happy to share my passion..glad you liked..
joyce ivy (65.12.35.192) -- Friday, January 7 2005, 08:46 pm

AWESOME TERRIE

yes Terrie I love this one. it is beautiful. how a love can make you so complete. and without that love you are lost. your hearts cries for that love. a special love shared by 2 heart as they become one. very good Terrie. love your work. -joyce
Terrie* (65.148.211.61) -- Saturday, January 8 2005, 03:34 am

Joyce, the strength in our heartbeat is Gods...

with out Gods heartbeat planted within ours his and mine become very faint any love that is of Gods given choice i accept he knew i wasn't ready before so he waited until the perfect mate was found that has the same love to share whom am i to question, a challenge he set before me let me have it now for it may never pass my way again pleased that you love my work means sooooo much to me, that some one with such great talent enjoys reading mine if i can touch and inspire someone with the passion i have for another in my heart then i didn't waste anyones time if they can feel what i feel thanx
Aimee: ) (202.89.42.214) -- Saturday, January 8 2005, 04:43 am

Love it...

hey love your poem its very touching! thanx for sharing also thanx for commenting on mine!
Terrie* (65.148.231.174) -- Saturday, January 8 2005, 05:42 pm

Hi Aimee

happy to hear that this touched you enough to draw an emotion to your heart your very welcomed 'aye lil' one it is a delight to come here to what i call "my sanctuary" and read your poetry , i find them all very pleasing and soft on the heart enjoy your weekend
Aimee: ) (210.55.106.113) -- Monday, January 10 2005, 09:59 pm

thanks terrie

well thank you!!!i love to read your poems too!!!
 
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