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Pain
Author: Angel On The Edge

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Slowly and painfully, im dying
Dying of something I cant explain
It hurts so bad
Yet I donít know why!
I cant help but be sad,
Everybody thinks im going mad.

In the dark I see no light
The light that once shined so bright
Itís lost
Lost in a sea of pain
I try to shout out
But no one will help

Nothings going right
You donít know what its like
Deep inside im bleeding
Forever in pain.

I want to end my life
That light I cannot find
I feel sick and weak
From a disease I cannot speak

With this I say good-bye
Im sorry I didnít try
But this life is unbearable
Im not even sure you care at all
But I love you and good-bye!!!

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joyce ivy (65.12.35.192) -- Friday, January 7 2005, 04:37 am

Amiee

this is very sad and I hope it is fiction...life can seem unbearable at time...but it does get better...very good write....joyce...
 
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