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My Friend
Author: Batafish22

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My best friend is a razor blade,
who sends all my feelings away,
im free of anger, of hate and fear,
for that split second that he is here,
he makes me feel like all is good,
like i have a reason to feel like i should,
he helps me get through thick and thin,
he is in fact my only friend.

------- Author's Notes -------

this is my first poem, and it was written in the span of like five min. so any criticism is welcome.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Mini K (64.72.35.101) -- Tuesday, December 21 2004, 05:10 pm

Great but,

But i am your friend my friend is a box cutter but u are my other 1...
batafish22 (64.72.57.205) -- Sunday, December 26 2004, 05:26 am

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thanx i really needed to hear that, even if it is too late to change anything
brittany (24.154.111.213) -- Saturday, January 22 2005, 04:40 am

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My best friend is the razor blade too. The only friend that understands me
batafish22 (170.76.22.10) -- Thursday, May 19 2005, 03:44 pm

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i know how you feel
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

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