Once Again by Batafish22

i've f*cked up once again
i can't see what i lack
yet i've f*cked up once again
and now i want you back
you say that i don't love you
and that i just don't care
yet whenever you are sad or blue
i try my hardest to be there
there's nothing you can say or do
to change the way i feel
i know that i have messed up
and i'll try to change, i will
no one seems to notice me
no one seems to care
no one except you, perhaps
would notice if i wasn't there
so now you know how i feel
every day and every night
and nothing ever changes
even when i try with all my might

joyce ivy (68.19.179.10) -- Tuesday, December 21 2004, 03:40 pm

So Sad Bata
very sad write...great job on emotions here....thanks for sharing...joyce

batafish22 (64.72.57.205) -- Tuesday, December 21 2004, 04:52 pm

joyce ivy
thanks for commenting.

corey jordan (216.167.170.246) -- Saturday, April 9 2005, 06:31 am

saddens me
hey man umm i love the poem.. great sence of emotion and u really bring the words 2 life.. and even though it is real.. and not some bull some 1 made up 2 be cool... your bro CJ

??? (64.12.116.197) -- Wednesday, April 13 2005, 04:48 am

I know
Hey really like your poem. I kno the girl personally and she still really cares about you and she wishes thing would have turned out different. She said she will always be there for you if you ever need a friend or a shoulder to cry on. You have talent dont ever let anyone tell you you dont!!! peace out man

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