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Darin I Miss You
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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A smile as wide as can be,
Another toy has came for me,
My brother sent me this gift from England,
What could it be that I want so much?
What could it be that I miss so dear?
Paxo, Bisto or even Cadburys dairy milk,
I open in a hurry so excited you see,
OH boy, I love it Brother I wish you could see,
A digital camera he sent me this way,
To tell him I love him would seem like a joke,
To tell him I miss him,
This I think he would feel,
But to write him a poem that tell how I feel,
Thatís it I know one day he will read,
Darin I love you with my beating heart,
Darin I miss you, being so far apart,
I miss your wife Linda and children that have grown,
Noah and Gracie sent pictures please soon,
If you could all give a hug and hold on tight,
Iíll be the strength you feel in each arm,
Till I see you all again, and I hope that itís soon,
I love you all with my beating heart,
To you my family I thank you so much,
For making this distance fade,
By talking on the phone,
My thoughts are with you as always they are,
Think of me next time you order a curry.

------- Author's Notes -------

Darin Thank You for being my Brother and friend

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.211.88) -- Thursday, December 23 2004, 01:16 pm

Clive,this broke a tear lose from my heart...

you write with so much passion from the heart in what ever the subject may be..always draws me in ,as you can see. this is such a lovely heart warming read Darin will be happily pleased, now you can keep updated on pic's via p.c...thank you for sharing my poetic friend..

p.s
they all felt your warm tight embrace...in every word you wrote...as your words always manage to release a sweet touch..
Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Thursday, December 23 2004, 02:23 pm

Thank You Terrie

For your words of feeling that help keep me writing
Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Thursday, December 23 2004, 04:26 pm

More typos

2nd line come not came
13th line tells not tell
18th line send not sent
sorry guys I think I'm starting that old timers thing
joyce ivy (65.12.35.205) -- Thursday, December 23 2004, 05:30 pm

It's Ok Clive

I have old timers too...mess up alot myself...it's beautiful anyway...so much passion in your words...love your work...thanks for sharing...
 
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