To Batafish
27 December, 2004
Author: Ben Franklin
questioning why your here,
your very low esteem draws me a tear.
such a talent in what you do,
your writing speaks volumes
and it shines right through.
I may have felt the way you do now,
questioning the world...
"why"
"when"
and "how".
you see we are put here for a reason that can
take a long time to find,
but me caring about about you,well..
do you not see that as a sign?
keep your head up mate.
------- Author's Notes -------
for batafish |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Leah (204.112.163.220) -- Tuesday, December 28 2004, 09:33 am nice words.... |
| Ben F (81.100.175.39) -- Tuesday, December 28 2004, 11:12 am he just seems really down as alot of other people do,but we can all use a lift sometime. thanks for reading. Ben |
| Terrie* (65.148.233.122) -- Wednesday, December 29 2004, 02:35 am you share w/our friend here..many of us question the same...some of us find the answers almost immediatly sometimes we don't...it took me 13 years to find out mine..when i lost love to death..until he found host in another and has returned and revived my heart..thank you for such deep words..Batafish will ..be touched as i...HUGS/LOVE..and a better 2005.... |
| Ben F (81.100.175.39) -- Wednesday, December 29 2004, 03:22 pm thank you for reading T,hope you also have a lovely 2005, lots of Love Your friend Ben. |
| joyce ivy (68.19.169.142) -- Wednesday, December 29 2004, 04:26 pm very nice poem Ben.from a kind heart.Batafish will be lifted.just as you lift all of us here with your words.thanks for sharing your lovely work. your friend.Joyce |
| Ben F (81.100.175.39) -- Wednesday, December 29 2004, 04:34 pm hi J, thank you for your kind words,hope its proved to batafish that theres people that care. take care your friend Ben x |
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