Heavenly Visits
Author: CD


I saw someone the other day resembling you alot.
For me a brief moment in time you were alive again,
I simply just forgot.
Her mannerisms were such like yours,
her face, her hair, and her style.
For just a brief moment in time
seeing you again I began to smile.
But it wasn't you, no, not at all,
just my heart playing tricks on me.
I know though that you're always there,
just not now,
someone again I'll see.
Please come visit me again sometime,
never leave my side.
I have been so sad and lonely mom since you have died.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Silkened Moon ( -- Wednesday, October 15 2003, 11:56 pm

Touching poem....

Touching poem CD! I absolutely loved it! It nearly made me cry sorrowfully! It's so sad. Awesome job! Keep writing, and I'll keep reading!
Terrie* ( -- Saturday, October 18 2003, 03:51 am

absolutely beautiful...

very touching...i empathize on your loss...for me it was 2 yrs. since i lost my mom/my friend...thank you for sharing
Ben ( -- Saturday, October 18 2003, 04:29 am

Shoes no one else can fill....

Shoes no one else can fill, CD, are Mom's. I can relate to this poem. Every now and then I see someone who brings Mom to mind. You never stop missing Mom. Very well expressed here. Thank you! ***Ben
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