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Real Love
4 January, 2005
Author: Mike

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I have little time left on this Earth
So say you'll be mine and make yourself heard.
Together into the ground we will go,
Hand in hand to the world below.

Together we'll be through thick and thin,
Join together, two bodies in one skin.
No matter what happens I'll be with you,
We'll never be apart, never be two.

You're the only thing thats keeping me sane,
As long as I'm with you my good thoughts will reign.
This bond between us nothing can sever
Because we have love, and love is forever.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah (204.112.162.35) -- Wednesday, January 5 2005, 10:40 am

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luv is forever that is so true......great poems!
aimee aka bubz (210.55.106.55) -- Friday, March 11 2005, 08:28 am

awesome love poem mike

i luv dis poem... itz so romantic how beautiful-really love it. kept up the good work-your good at love poems
LBK (84.9.36.131) -- Saturday, March 12 2005, 01:01 am

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It's great to hear you still have hope :P...Still, love doesn't have to be all romantic, I feel the same way about you in a non gay way :P...Don't feel weird :P
Raimee (80.5.40.153) -- Tuesday, March 22 2005, 10:52 pm

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..I'd feel weird if I were you Mike. ;) Lmao, nah.. Uhhm, I really like this poem. Mainly because it's different than you're usual poems and cause I'm a sucker for love. :) Also them last two lines, they're just magical.
Mike (212.85.21.178) -- Monday, April 4 2005, 04:43 pm

Pfft.

Didn't like this one. I can't do love poems. :P
Raimee (80.5.40.153) -- Monday, April 11 2005, 09:36 am

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Oh come off it, you can. I really liked this one.
 
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