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No One Notices, Speak Up
Author: The Lost Girl

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Walking around, day by day,
Cuts bright as roses, on my arms -
there they lay.

They scream for attention,
for one passing glance
but no one notices,
Why would I take that chance?

Take my own life?
I'm just not that one girl,
who hates her life enough
to give death a whirl.

I'm 15 years old,
they say I should be happy.
Well, someone speak up -
then one day I might be.

------- Author's Notes -------

This is one of my first poems. I thought it would be a good idea to start putting my feelings into writings instead of... Well, I would appreciate any comments at all.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

joyce ivy (65.12.35.192) -- Friday, January 7 2005, 06:14 pm

Lost Girl

It is very good to put your feelings into words. children are under so much pressure these days. just remember your never alone keep writting. it helps. I do it everyday thanks for sharing. your poem is very good -joyce
Aimee: ) (202.89.42.214) -- Saturday, January 8 2005, 03:37 am

Awesome

awesome writting I started to writing and now i find my feelings are easier to understand! kept up the good work
christine *aka* dimples (202.89.42.242) -- Sunday, January 9 2005, 02:04 am

so sad

that really is an awesome poem. its so sad, and it really gives a glimpse into your world.
k. (192.168.93.108) -- Thursday, March 17 2005, 11:28 pm

sharing

you so brave to bare your soul like this and i can relate. i hope things are better for you now, but at the moment my happiness is put on hold.
Kami (12.72.106.134) -- Sunday, June 19 2005, 10:49 pm

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I can Remeber When I was fifteen, and how alot of people use to tell how i should be happy. well they weren't fifteen living in a sadistic world now where they
jessicanichols (64.12.116.130) -- Saturday, August 6 2005, 08:19 pm

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i know what you feel but i guess you noticed mine hu tank you 4 that
 
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