Someone I Can't See
Author: CD


I saw you from a distance and knew you were watching over me.
You're always around, but you're someone I can't see.
Are you always there even when I push you away?
How is it that you're with me all night and all day?
I hope that my life now is more pleasing to you.
You're always with me and know what I've been through.
I place my life into your hands, please be gentle with me.
I know that you're always there, you're just someone I can't see.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Nicole ( -- Saturday, February 1 2003, 05:50 pm


I really like your poem..=)
Ben F ( -- Saturday, April 22 2006, 08:39 am

Your work...

is stunning!please keep posting!
Terrie* ( -- Saturday, April 22 2006, 09:40 pm

such softness felt within the heart of many souls

C D, this is AWESOME !! i cain totally connect my aoul into the canvass you paint before us, many of us experience the gentlness of such sheerness, thank you for sharin'
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