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My Nights Tears
Author: LinzAy

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I cry at night
Hoping that no one hears
Praying my breath is light
That I have silent tears
I cry at night
When I feel most alone
When I can see myself a child
Though I am mostly grown

The night envelopes me
It takes me by the hand
Lets me weep in it's embrace
Because it understands

These tears I cry
Fall deep into the night
Burn through my pillow
And set themselves aflight
These tears I cry
I know where they travel to
They sit at the windows of your heart
For they belong to you

------- Author's Notes -------

This is an old poem :D no truth here now...thankgod.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Megan (152.163.100.74) -- Saturday, January 8 2005, 04:08 pm

My Nights Tears

Wonderfully written, easy to follow, glad to hear your feeling better & that this is an old poem.
Terrie* (65.148.215.56) -- Sunday, January 9 2005, 01:27 am

tears flow and cleanse ones soul...

LinzAy, very deep to place part of your heart as i can see as true poets do they go deep into the heart of another and thats where the words flow excellent piece and i must say i have felt these tears before cause sometimes our tears do belong to another heart thanx foe sharing love your poems they are exquisite
LinzAy (4.27.186.183) -- Sunday, January 9 2005, 04:30 am

Terrie* and Megan

Thanks so much the wonderful comments!
Britney (172.16.1.232) -- Friday, January 14 2005, 05:37 pm

Great

This was a well written and a lovely poem. Great job ~Britney~
LinzAy (4.27.179.197) -- Saturday, January 15 2005, 03:26 am

Britney

Aw! thankyou so much! glad you enjoyed
Aj (64.32.146.37) -- Wednesday, March 9 2005, 01:09 am

Heart felt

What more can i say, that was heart felt, and beautiful. Keep it up.
LinzAy (205.188.116.200) -- Saturday, December 10 2005, 07:47 pm

Thanks

woops...been a while since I've been here!...pc access is a bish.....thanks so much for that sweet comment!
 
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